Business Studies: College Admission Essay Sample
学校: Virginia Commonwealth University
I am incredibly focussed on studying business. I have had a piqued interest in business ever since I was a little kid, capitalizing on my cuteness by offering massages, at a price. This interest developed into enthusiasm to study real business and work in the financial field. I feel like I can pursue my goal of a career in the finance field at VCU through VCU’s fantastic School of Business.
In business, connections are extremely important. Luckily for VCU business students, VCU is located in the heart of Richmond, where internships and connections are abundant. I hope to apply into the School of Business honors program as soon as possible and collaborate with peers on future business ventures, making the connections I know I will need in order to succeed in my career goals.

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